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| hime1221 2007-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseI can't really handle the morbid stuff, but it was well written. But I can't seem to get away from your horror stuff, even though it scares the heck out of me!! Wa! -sniffle- |
| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI like it the way it is. Sure maybe the rhythm breaks every once in a while but it's a good poem. Keep writing. Constance |
| screaming rusty static 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseIntense. I like the repetition. |
| Hopeless-and-helpless01 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuse*coughs quietly, looks around and smiles* i like it... gave me the creeps, but eh, whatchya gonna do bout it? interesting idea. Are these voices or the devil, hm? I can't exactly depict that one. but whatever it is, I'm lovin' it and i bet so are many of your fans out there. good work, Catchya dani |
| wolfeh 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseSo powerfully written. ~wolfeh (4.40 in the pm) |
| the nonexistant 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow! I loved this. It is very well written. I loved the intensity of it. Very eye catching and real. I love the way it's down to earth and true...Great work! |
| SummerMindset 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThank you for your kind review on my poem. =) And yes, to answer your question, she is a bit of a control freak. =| Anyways, great piece! Very interesting and well written. Very descripitive too. =) Keep up the great work! |
| Kleptomaniacal Tendencies 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseSheisse, braindead, this was real. It was frightening to me, as it reminded me greatly of the nightmares in which I lose myself. I don't know what you were shooting for, but I found it a devestatingly perfect description of what I have to go through. Thank you for terrifying me. And thank you for sharing. |
| dragonsdream13 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is pretty dark. It's very mysterious as we don't know what exactly is haunting him, but also very graphic and somewhat scary. I agree that the use of repitition works well in this poem. Good job!-DragonsDream |
| Farran 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the imidery, but to be honest I hate the structure, sorry. But first time I clicked on it I ran screaning. Again I love the imidry. |
| No1luvstimmy 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow! Excellent! |
| midnightcircus84 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseLike the others, I absolutely loved it! The use of repetition is very effective in this work. |
| Karine Dragon'sheart 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseLove it, of course...answering the questions from all of your lovely reviews, no, I'm not from the South, but I grew up on Jimmy Buffett and Lynyrd Skynyrd, with Aerosmith and The Blues Brothers too. the song poem I wrote was utterly random, so I'm not surprised that it was a little weird. And to the others...that's just the utterly romantic poet in me yanking me by the ear and forcing me to write. Thank you, thank you, thank you. There is one I think you'll like, and when you get down to it, please tell me what you think of it. 'Flutist of Chang'an and Turned are my favorites so far. Laters! KD |
| GerardYuroshi 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. ^_^ I like it! It makes you wonder what the things are O.o ~Gerry |
| BlueDannyLew 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseDefinately teases the imagination.I like the way you added repetition in some parts of the poem, but it seemed too repetitive in some sentences.Particularly the wailing in your head sentence. Still this was very good! |