this was so sad. that's pretty much all i can say. maybe i'm way to sensitive right now, but it's still pretty.

yeah i know how that is. good work. cheers-rabbit

I've been reading some of your work. Some good some bad, but still keep writing its your calling. You have writen 143 storys do you have a 2nd life. Joking... Keep writing.

This is great. You can see what's happening, and you can feel the emotion of both Bret and the spectators. And the line "an immortal breaking down before/them on national tv" is fantastic.