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| HentaiZaru 2008-06-23 ch 15,  | abuseThis is so cute, oh my gosh! I love it! Update soon! |
| BloodstainedSunday'sBest 2008-05-03 ch 15, | abuseoh goodness this story is awesome! I actually cried a few chapters ago when Autumn first met up with his father again. it was so cute! so yes updateupdateupdate :]] |
| Polka-dotted-cow 2008-02-19 ch 15, | abuseAmazing story. The cuts between P.O.V. are done well (ever heard of Robert Jordan? He's the creator of the Wheel of Time series, and last I checked somewhere around book 9--I think that's where the list I found ended, there were 98 different P.O.V.s, total.) But, it needs updates. Even small ones are nice, as long as they're there, and consistent. Pleases? |
| Rosie 2008-02-04 ch 14, anon. | abuseSorry I just realised what I just wrote, and felt like an idiot... please update... not review. Rosie |
| Rosie 2008-02-04 ch 15, anon. | abuseHey, this story RULES! I don't review very often... 'cause I'm a lazy bitch, but I thought I'd take the effort this time. I know life's a pain in the arse when it comes to writing and posting but... please review. Rosie |
| Enaid 2007-12-12 ch 12, | abuseahh oregon trail that was the best game ever... except i always died and never made it to the end *sigh* anywhoo bout the story. i actually thought that bastien was going to be half elf like november and that in some weird way they were related... how cool would that be! great story luvin it |
| Enaid 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abusei think this is going to be some of your best work yet. i really like that it includes magic and technology so it not really magic against mortals. i think dragons are cool though so maybe some good dragons will enter the picture at some point?? |
| merrymowmow 2007-12-10 ch 15, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Amindaya 2007-11-23 ch 15, | abuseWow, so he was friends with Harley. Go figure. |
| dreamerdoll 2007-11-07 ch 6, | abuselove it so far! Brilliant job! |
| pour-ink-prone 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abusedude. you're awesome. i love this story as well as the "my toaster thinks i'm crazy" one. keep up the good work. ^_^ |
| Asitha 2007-11-01 ch 15, | abuseyes, an update! I'm so loving this story, Bastien especially. I can't wait for an update ^_^ |
| Mage Dudette 2007-10-30 ch 15, | abusejst made me go 'aww' cuteness, lols love those two ^__^ and bastian's dad is awesome, he's such a brilliantly realised character. bring on the next chapter! this always gets me hooked btw. >.> i'm not addicted, honest? |
| Midnights Scream 2007-10-25 ch 15, | abuseawh. They have a relationship and I can understand why Autumn is worried about his secret getting out, but it seems unfair that he got so angry at Orion, but I probably would be too if I didn't understand the situation. :) Autumn is a sweetie and he and Orion make an amazing couple! |
| Liviania 2007-10-25 ch 15, | abuseI need to review what's going on. *sigh* The scene between Dominique and Bastien was so cute. ^_^ And poor Harley, unable to explain to Bastien without giving everything away. Livi |