That was so adorable!! They are such a funny couple and I couldn't stop laughing at the end. I'm still caught between laughing and giving in to the fuzzy feelings I have now :D

I love this story it is so cute! :)

TEEHEE!! the characters are all so adorable!

Awe! I love it! Awesome story!

Aw! That was adorable! Very well written, too.

This was really freakin' cute. I loved it.
you're a pretty fantastic writer.

Aw, I loved it! :) It was extremely sweet and really funny.

aw...what a cute story..its like a normal fairy tale in a book you read but now you got 2 guys as the character..LOL..LOVE IT!

i loved it. tioth is hilarious and i love how you made fun of the hero's jouney (joesph cambell's theory). this is a pretty wacked up fairy tale but, as i said, i can't help but faal in love with the story and with the characters.

Aw! I actually let out a sigh of contentment at the end. It was so good. =D

I heart this story. Like, a lot. :)

Very cute. It's a nice take on the classic theme. Hurray for you!

That was so sweet! They're perfect for each other.

aw that was adorable. Well written also. Thanks for sharing.

Adorable!