|Reviews for Torn Up|
| MZ 10/4/06 . chapter 1
I love all of your stuff. you really are a great writer. keep it up. you're going on my favorites
| Hidden Lies 8/8/06 . chapter 1
Awesome. My 'dad' is the same, but I never talk to him and Ih aven't for almost two years now. I really like this poem, you express yourself brilliently throughtout all of your work! Love it! Love You! :P
| SayIt'sWrong 6/4/06 . chapter 1
This is so powerful and touching. Beautifully written again. You are a great writer. Vx
| darkdreamerx 4/26/06 . chapter 1
wow...that's really emotional..I'm sorry if this is true, if not, still, the idea makes me grateful for my father...this is really amazing. I've written poems that just came out, but this one is definitly one of those genuinely heartfelt poems mine couldn't compare to.
| poemkitten7 4/18/06 . chapter 1
Wow, your writing style amazes me. *gasp* _ You're a terrific writer. This a wonderful piece of work. Very beautifully written. Keep writing!
| SeaVoi 4/14/06 . chapter 1
I love your writing style, this is a good poem. I think there a lot of people here that can relate to this!
| azn aquarian 4/14/06 . chapter 1
WHOA WHOA WHOA!i'm stunned )man..you're GOOD! like..REALY GOOD!i love it..it's heaps good!kep writing *thumbs up**!
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 4/13/06 . chapter 1
Wow, the first few lines really express how my mom makes me feel. I don't think it's your best but I don't like it a lot.
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 4/13/06 . chapter 1
*hugs* wow...i dont no this feeling, but the way you wrote this poem made me feel it...just brilliant...i loved this, and i am sorry for how you feel *hugs* Neways, yer, this was a great expression of ur feelings, ur a wonderful poet_ *huggles*
| Aquafied 4/13/06 . chapter 1
very hopes for all of us sometimes
| Neaera 4/13/06 . chapter 1
OMGoodness... O boy how can I relate? A lot... Maybe that's not a good thing cuz it's a terrible thing to feel like this. But honestly, I do kno how you feel ... And this was wow.. how do you put your emotions into words so well? gahh lol Wicked as always hun! Keep it up!
| Adaku 4/13/06 . chapter 1
Very very interesting poem you here. I wish I can write poem good. ; Anyway, keep up the good work.
Till next time
| Fit of Destiny 4/13/06 . chapter 1
Nice poem. I really like it and I can semi-relate. Its really expressive.
| Kayla Reinvented 4/13/06 . chapter 1
Sad... great poem for our age group to identify with. It's good to know someone feels the same about their parents.