Yay! More story. That Hero, he is kind of...yeah...Anyway, nice job. Can't wait to read more. I loved the 20 questions, but who was it?!?!? Haha.

Utterly, Utterly and brilliantly crazy. with a lovey and weird commuinity. so, keep up the good work!

Signed, DeafnotDumb

Ha. Short and to the point.

20 questions...

This was good stuff. Keep it upzorz.

Hee... copulating... dogs are stupid that way...

Now I get hackneyed: Funny chapter, write some more soon, kzorz?!?!

I'm serious. Cya

Haha, love this stuff. Hehe, great job. I like the dog part...and the "star pupil cheating on a test"...hahaha, keep it coming!

Roxors 2 da max. I had a message from my mentor that told me to say that about this story. Roxors 2 da max, I mean. I suppose...

Dog had a disappointingly small amount of dialogue in this chapter. But I liked Catwoman's moving lines: "Then come on!" I can feel her inner turmoil rising through her brusque and somewhat licentious manner.

And I liked the chapter too...

FINALLY! Do you know how long I have been waiting? Well, I suppose it was worth it. Now, go do some more writing, the story is getting better every time.

very good, this is extremely amusing. i suppose this is one of the few stories where a little bit more description would kill it. loved it VERY much!

Rofl. This is a hilarious parody of fantasy. I like how you made it like 89.34597 percent dialogue, and only like 10.65403 percent prose. It kept the story going and made it seem more unique. Keep it goin', or else... I'll, um... grow a beard.

I love it, the whole thing. And your sister is crazy, fantasy is the best, AND it is true literature. Stupid realistic/science fiction people. Joking, your sister isn't stupid. I just love fantasy, FOREVER! Great story, great plot, very original and hilarious. I like the way you modernized medievil. Great job!