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| Rose Valentine 2007-08-24 ch 4,  | abuseI feel sorry for both Mary and Elizabeth - I like where this is going...the author's cruelty, the reader's sympathy - that technique applies well to award-winning stories! The genre of this may be Historical/Drama, I suggest. |
| Rose Valentine 2007-08-24 ch 3, | abuseI am a fan of the Tudors myself - God, why does Mary have to be bitterly shunned? Good story! I like where the plot is going. |
| Sarah's State of Grace 2007-02-12 ch 4, | abuseA bittersweet victory indeed. Very good job. I love this, please keep it up! ~Sarah's State of Grace~ |
| Nicci 2006-11-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseAn interesting take on a sad story. It really is sad what Henry did to his family, and while I don't really agree with how you potrayed Mary, it was very well-written and intersting story! |
| Nicci 2006-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting take on Mary, and it's very well-written! I've never particularly liked her, but oh well. |
| mad about books 2006-07-29 ch 4, | abuse(Sigh!) A wonderful piece about Mary, who is often overlooked in favor for Elizabeth.. You write well..Keep it up! |
| cuddle pup 2006-07-26 ch 4, | abuseThis was quite good. My own favorite figure was always Mary, Queen of Scots.-K |
| . .Lulian. . 2006-07-22 ch 4, | abuseoh wow, this is good... i saw that you said you weren't continuing it, and i was a bit disappointed. I really wanted to read about Mary... the title caught my interest... xD i read a book on queen anne, but i don't remember the author's name. It was called "Doomed Queen Anne" and then i read "Beware, Princess Elizabeth" by the same author, and i've been dying to read "Bloody Mary" but i could never find it. I want to read the nine day queen and the book about king henry. I never thought i could be this interested in history. heh, well, this is really good, and i'd love if you continued it sooner or later... preferably sooner, but... yeah.. =)i love the story. |
| highly-kissable 2006-07-19 ch 4, | abuseaww so sad its nice to see a story where Mary isnt the villian |
| Estora 2006-06-28 ch 4, | abuseThat was an awesome chapter. I feel really sorry for Anne now. Ah well. Poor Mary. Her life wan't exactly that smooth, was it? I love the way you're writing this. This would have to be one of the best stories I have ever read. As I said before, you could seriously turn this into a novel. Thank you for the incredible read! I can't wait for the next chapter. Best of luck! ~ Estora ~ |
| l. fayette 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseooh, its good. but isnt there a book titled "mary bloody mary" with a similar plot? |
| Catherine Carter 2006-06-23 ch 4, | abuseWhoah intense chapter. I loved the Bible passage; it really reminds the reader about how religious they were back then, and specifically how extremely devout Mary was. |
| Estora 2006-06-20 ch 3, | abuseI kid you not, you could seriously turn this materpiece into a novel. I am in love with this story. Please keep up the awesome work, alright? I'm be waiting (impatiently) for your next chapter. Good luck! Thanks for the great read so far! ~ Estora ~ |
| mad about books 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseReally wonderful! Mary has always been misunderstood in history but here, you've done a great job of portraying both what she had to go through and her character. |
| Chelsea Plum 2006-05-18 ch 3, | abuseI love this story! The tone and mood of Mary's life in this story are perfect. Your writing is unique. Keep posting! Chelsea Plum |