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emizulu 2006-04-22 . chapter 1
That's awesome. Really awesome.

I'm not as good a reviewer as the previous person, but I have to say that if I heard that song, I'd definitely buy the cd. Well written!
Faithless Juliet 2006-04-13 . chapter 1
(Yellow lights in front of me.) I like the originality and uniqueness of that statement - it’s not the GO of green, or the STOP of red, but the should I go, or stop, of Yellow - I think that verse spoke the clearest to me. It really gave me an image of the feeling, and I’m no expert but I like it when in a song I can relate to all of it, the sound, the lyrics, the ideas, the circumstances, and even feel a little bit extra and I think this did that for me - without the music of course, but I’m sure it would rock.

Flowers form figments,/Made of bloody pigments,/You darken the sullen tints,/And leave me in obscurity. - This is such hardcore imagery in here.

But I’m your flu./How unfortunate for you. - Again with the hints of the idea - I can see the two of you feeding of each other, anger, and love, and resentment, the good days and the bad, if you will. Again, I’m not a music producer or anything but I love music, and these are some great lyrics. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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