wowwow... Dang I like your poems to much. You need to like... publish a book so I can carry it around with me and read from it all the time. _

"Make up words to a song I used to know"

A very unexpected last line, but one that is so real.

I like.

I don't know why but this poem makes me really sad. Maybe it's because of the emptiness of the world, or you? I don't know, it just does. I have to say this even if it is off topic. I love tea, and I hate coffee. Wow, glad I got that out. Lol, sorry, great poem! I love poetry.

the formatting and grammar whatnots make it a bit difficult to read, but it's interesting how you take random, ordinary things and combine them into the ending.

Wonderful imagry. I loved it. But there were so many grammatical mistakes it was distracting. I recomend revising this. It's a great piece, truly.