|Reviews for The green sign points to hevean|
| Flying With Fish 5/5/06 . chapter 1
wowwow... Dang I like your poems to much. You need to like... publish a book so I can carry it around with me and read from it all the time. _
| Femme de Dieu 4/22/06 . chapter 1
"Make up words to a song I used to know"
A very unexpected last line, but one that is so real.
| Ashelin 4/14/06 . chapter 1
I don't know why but this poem makes me really sad. Maybe it's because of the emptiness of the world, or you? I don't know, it just does. I have to say this even if it is off topic. I love tea, and I hate coffee. Wow, glad I got that out. Lol, sorry, great poem! I love poetry.
| bleed gilead 4/13/06 . chapter 1
the formatting and grammar whatnots make it a bit difficult to read, but it's interesting how you take random, ordinary things and combine them into the ending.
| Soul Effrontery 4/13/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful imagry. I loved it. But there were so many grammatical mistakes it was distracting. I recomend revising this. It's a great piece, truly.