wow its like the guy and the poem are leading u on. i like how u used "with only my shirt as the barrier" for both the good part and the disappointing part. nice job

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Loved the your shirt/they're shirt barrier image, and all the whisky/cigarette undercurrents - this is a different tone then I've seen from you. Quite sexual, animal on the prowl kind of feeling to it - but aren't all bars just watering wholes in disguise or something. I like it; I can really relate to you approaching them and then having to stay (forcibly.) Great work.

Juliet.