Wow, I love the imagery. I had a wonderful picture full of color and life while reading each line. I especially love the line about figurative abortion, not in a morbid way, but you have used in a way that I had never though to use it. Great work.

This I really like. It kind of takes you away from it all you know?

just so you know, i don't want attention or sympathy from others when i write. i hate when people judge me like that without knowing me. i write to vent, but since i can't seem to get that point through to you (like too many people, you have the typical bias against anything you view as emo), i give up. think of me what you want. good luck with writing.

Again, a good poem. Cryptic a bit, but those kind are the best, they keep you thinking

great job

wow, nice twist at the end, i like!

HAHA one of the best summaries ever.

As always, the descriptions and wording are flawless. You have a gift in poetry that 99% of this site lacks. And I appreciate you for it.