Totally messed up! thats what I loved about it. It would be good to read the story from Ralin's poit of view.

Good job! :)

wow... that's disturbing...
maybe sometime from Ralin's perpestive... that's be cool
Lee

I read this story once every now and again, but every time I love it as much as the time before.
Its ** beautiufl, honestly, and think I will print it out and file it away somewhere to keep for as long as I can. I dodnt know what about it makes me so drawn to it -sadistic I guess- but the pain is so gorgeous. I love the vilence, I love the almost real emotions and I love the love. The whole thing is just Gorgeous to me. Beutiful, beutiful.
Well done, brava.
I love it.
Love you for wriitng it.

Lovelove.
Erasmuss.

its kinda a twisted story..i dont want to say its great or whatever...it is not great to beat people and thing that is Love..as it is not..is just a figment of the brain that think it is Love..but i want to say that you are great to able to write this story...and i just want to say that i will read your other story and maybe they are not so twisted and sad?no,?they are?haha never mind i will read it cause i think you've done an amazing story on this one..!

SO strangely beautiful, amazing, i loved it. you have two incredibly opposite characters, one needing affection, the other needing an outlet, needing to be rough. it's the worst case scenario of opposites attract. but their relationship is so scarred yet so beautiful. i should stop analyzing, though, right? lol, wonderful job. :D i loved it.

Aw. So well written, you vaptured the emotions perfectly, well done.

Wow, that was the most messed up thing I've ever read. And you know what, I loved every minute of it. It's a wonderful story, unique, and real. I love it.

Wow, I've never read anything like this.It's really a strong point to come from and devise two people.Maybe the new material is what makes it so interesting, but it's something.

I AM NOT GOING TO REVIEW THIS ONE. DAMNIT I JUST DID, DAMNIT

WAHAHAHAHAshit girl.I only found one weird thing, "It was few days that he would let me sit with him, while he recuperated in the, and feed him. " I don't get this sentence, I think you've messed with a word or something.I love it hehehehehe XDI can say...it's your most original piece, I love it to bits.

whoa... awkward.

Another great story! I'm not sure if you're planning to continue this, or if it's a one shot thing. Either way, it's really well written and thought out. Though sad, it reaks talent. -laughs- Never said that before.