this was really good. enjoyed reading this.

brilliant. absolutely brilliant.

i like this style. it's refreshing and clever.

wonderful job. keep up the great work!

wow. very very well done. spectacular. stunning. all around gorgeous!

i thought this was a real good story poem. you basically sumed up the story in a poem. great write!

very nice this take you to a whole new world. detail has been enscribed so deeply well done.;)

This is amazing... you obviously have a very alternative way of thinking! This takes the reader on such an explorative and imaginative journey... it's hard to believe this came out of your head. Abstract and brilliant.

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