 gummybearmurder 2007-05-17 . chapter 1I didn't quite get it..
But I think if I had, it would've been rly cute. |
 failte200 2007-03-30 . chapter 1I don't get it.
You're kind of obsessed with color, ain'tcha... |
 MustardTofu 2006-12-20 . chapter 1a very swet story. |
 InstantOatmeal 2006-11-14 . chapter 1*drool*
...Now I'm hungry...but in what context I won't emphasize...;P
This is fantastic! I love it! It's completely adorable! The one thing I'd point out is the "boy/man" and "gaze/attention"...it was a bit distracting, but other than that, it was great! |
 Maris. S 2006-04-14 . chapter 1*lol* i like the way that this was written. It really makes me want to go rob a candy store ^^ |
 xanthofile 2006-04-14 . chapter 1oh my god...all that mention of cloyingly sweeties make me feel sick. *cracks up*
did this come out of nowhere, or what?
oh my god. *still laughing* i had to read it twice to even get it, and i'm still not sure of what's going on. that's awesome! |