I didn't quite get it..
But I think if I had, it would've been rly cute.

I don't get it.

You're kind of obsessed with color, ain'tcha...

a very swet story.

*drool*
...Now I'm hungry...but in what context I won't emphasize...;P
This is fantastic! I love it! It's completely adorable! The one thing I'd point out is the "boy/man" and "gaze/attention"...it was a bit distracting, but other than that, it was great!

*lol* i like the way that this was written. It really makes me want to go rob a candy store ^^

oh my god...all that mention of cloyingly sweeties make me feel sick. *cracks up*

did this come out of nowhere, or what?

oh my god. *still laughing* i had to read it twice to even get it, and i'm still not sure of what's going on. that's awesome!