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| gummybearmurder 2007-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseI didn't quite get it.. But I think if I had, it would've been rly cute. |
| failte200 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI don't get it. You're kind of obsessed with color, ain'tcha... |
| MustardTofu 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abusea very swet story. |
| InstantOatmeal 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuse*drool* ...Now I'm hungry...but in what context I won't emphasize...;P This is fantastic! I love it! It's completely adorable! The one thing I'd point out is the "boy/man" and "gaze/attention"...it was a bit distracting, but other than that, it was great! |
| Maris. S 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuse*lol* i like the way that this was written. It really makes me want to go rob a candy store ^^ |
| xanthofile 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseoh my god...all that mention of cloyingly sweeties make me feel sick. *cracks up* did this come out of nowhere, or what? oh my god. *still laughing* i had to read it twice to even get it, and i'm still not sure of what's going on. that's awesome! |