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gummybearmurder
2007-05-17
ch 1,
abuseI didn't quite get it..
But I think if I had, it would've been rly cute.
failte200
2007-03-30
ch 1,
abuseI don't get it.

You're kind of obsessed with color, ain'tcha...
MustardTofu
2006-12-20
ch 1,
abusea very swet story.
InstantOatmeal
2006-11-14
ch 1,
abuse*drool*
...Now I'm hungry...but in what context I won't emphasize...;P
This is fantastic! I love it! It's completely adorable! The one thing I'd point out is the "boy/man" and "gaze/attention"...it was a bit distracting, but other than that, it was great!
Maris. S
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuse*lol* i like the way that this was written. It really makes me want to go rob a candy store ^^
xanthofile
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseoh my god...all that mention of cloyingly sweeties make me feel sick. *cracks up*

did this come out of nowhere, or what?

oh my god. *still laughing* i had to read it twice to even get it, and i'm still not sure of what's going on. that's awesome!
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