Its a great poem, but I feel that at some places, the words just don't seem to flow freely. Perhaps this is caused by large differences in syllables between some lines? Also, sometimes, the rhyming sounds forced, no offence.

This is a great poem, giving a good spotlight on the sinking of the Titanic.

I hope you keep writing.

wow. this was definitely a good poem. you did an awesome job, sort of explining their fault in not escaping sooner. and also the sudden shock of what was happening; of course, they thought it was entirely unsinkable!! haha they misjudged.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-