hey andi...finally reading more...

and wow...this is so good... loved the lines its not how i feel its what i am...and my heavy load of nothingness

loved it, *huggles*

lexa

Short, bitter, and very good. I like how broken the lines are, it goes well with the meaning.

o.O Wow... It's good and depressing... but I still like it! /Sigh/ I wish I could write poetry like this... But whatever. It's very good, keep writing!

heh, dont we all feel this way? another awesome one-

keep on writing Wintertigress-::-

wow. I like it! Write On!

andrew you know what i think of this poem. i think its good. obviously someone elses work. you cheating scum. bet u copied it off me. the fact i didnt write it doesnt change any thing. now R&R me bitch

BON your style is v. similar to Nolls in that its v. v. , i'm one to talk. But its VERY GOOD."My heavy load of nothingness."- Best line