Nice, you really get the feeling of an undercurrent, and giving the verbs their own line gives them the importance they deserve

Another terrific poem! Erm... I don't usually review poetry, too deep, I can't really think all that deeply, but I still know a good poem when I read one! You're a great poet. Keep on writing!

hm...im not sure exactly where you were going with this one. though, when you doodle, youre pretty much just drawing random things, right? and whatever i see in here, besides 'doodle' is pretty much about just thinking...about random things?

not sure. a bit confusing, but...

keep on writing Wintertigress-::-

nice one. I like doodling.. lol... Write On!

"Lethargic and monotonous"I liked that poem, especially for someone who likes MATHS. maths, as we know, completely lacks creativity