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Reviews For: Memories

Hemlock 2008-07-31 ch 4,	abuseThe second stanza is almost funny. I nearly choked on my tea. Somehow, really... it is somewhat funny!
wishing.on.echoes 2008-07-12 ch 4,	abuseReading this collection you can see the growth you've undergone in the past two years as a writer.
FELICIA-SPENCER 2008-06-19 ch 4,	abuseBeautiful memories you have there. I love the way you've taken a real life memory, but yet written it a way that still leaves a dab of mystery behind it. Birth of a love was one of my favorites. It was hot. Pure and simple. Hot. I also loved Grocery Store Blues/Real Boy. There was a sort of sadness there that was sheer brilliance. I likened it to falling for that one person who was so unattainable that you have to wonder if that person is really there, or if they were something your mind imagined that person to be. I loved it. I always tend to over think some things, but that just means there's always something deeper in that story that the eye can see. I love deciphering your poems. I love this entire collection of memories here. Great job.
charedice 2006-06-08 ch 3,	abusea clever little piece.. this kind of thing is difficult, and you've pulled it off well. keep it up.
crazy dog events 2006-05-15 ch 1,	abuseUnderstated and some how horrific. it made me queasy- which for some reason means I really liked it. -P.
Midnight Star Lights 2006-05-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is true about drama. This is well written. I hope to find time to read more of your work. all SMILES :) ~XoXo~
Faithless Juliet 2006-04-30 ch 2,	abuseI like how this is kind of a continuation of the last piece; where that ended with laying this begins on the same forefront. Again amazing last line; I love the star into partnership metaphor. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.
Faithless Juliet 2006-04-30 ch 1,	abuseLoved that last line. Perfection. Juliet.

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