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| crazy dog events 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abusei was so sure I'd already reviewed this one. bad bad dream, but also something like a bad dorm-room party. i was, for some reason, playing a klezmer soundtrack to this inside my head. Nice. -P. |
| in theory 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI like the manuscripts part, alwaysloved that word. Nice work. |
| heroin zombie 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseSort of comic and, well, absurd. I'm not sure if you wanted to get across anything specific other than absurdity, but even so, I enjoyed it. Fun to read, although, I guess because of silliness it seemed a bit... cheap. Fun though. |
| theCoffeeEnzyme 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abusethis is very good. i like the end a lot. |
| emeraude-irlandais 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. Usually I'm not hasty to describe something as *absurd*, but...yeah, you hit the nail on the head with the adjective this time. I like the last line, like it's a command from the voice inside your head, or a puppeteer's demand. :) Very Dali-esque. Keep writin'! `~bella~` |