Love the story and writing style! :) There are a few grammar/spelling mistakes though...but you probably polished them up already.

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this is pretty cool btw my name is aidan

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I just read "In descending order' And I must say 'Simply Ah-mazing! I really really liked the adventure. All the characters are so lovable. Usually I do't like a couple but everyone in the whole gang was so unique. I love Theo. Usually don't say that 'bout women, mind, but that sense of laughing at everything. It was so a wonderful brew of mystery, sarcasm, smirks, nonchalance, ass-kicking action and so much more!

And there was not much of a romance element to it, but I still love it enough to review even though it was posted like 4 years back! or 5, not too sure.

Actually, I'm not sure if you will get this. If you do, pretty please reply back (I want to claim to have received a message from the author of this awesome story!) with a "Oh hey, you're crazy. Of course you heart this story, I wrote it..." or something. K, then. Bie!

Augh! The end of this chapter gave me the chills! I love it when that happens when I'm reading a story..shows I'm really into it!

Ooh, interesting plot you have going here. I like it a lot, and will definitely read more of it. *nod nod*

Hm... I wonder what the importance of that notebook is... why the riots are occuring and who the person speaking was at the very end of the chapter and *continues to babble on and on*

I've definitely found a gem here. *nod* Can't wait to read more and see what happens!

That was the most amazing story I have ever read! I loved Tobias, and the story was so creative! Congradulations, seriously I loved it!

that was great! i wish i could read more! will U read any of my stories now? HM? and do U got an IM?

I really liked it! Even though the chapters were rather short, they were detailed and interesting. And I loved the characters! Great job _

Yay! Hawthorne! Oh, Lily's sneaky. I really don't like their parents...they annoy me. Hm...wonder what's gonna happen now?

Ah, Anton...he amuses me :P Who was on the radio? Ack, and why must Lily do that? She's gonna give everyone a heart attack!

I like the name of Theo's programme :P Probably will help Anton sleep better at night... Hehe, 'insight into Aidan's personality'. That would be handy :P Oh...who's behind the door? And what did Lily say to Hawthorne?

Wow, Lily's moods swing crazily! It's kinda scary... I love the way they charged into the room, thinking someone was being attacked...poor Loki...so much embarrassment :P

Tobias is so fun. He has to be the most cheerful person ever. Oh, Aidan has a snippy side! Yay! Soo...red folder? Something good?