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| SwitchVale 2006-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseThat definitely gets the feeling of rage across. Sometimes there's nothing complicated about rage, the simplicity really fit well. |
| AchtungBabyAchtung 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseangry andrew rears his head again! i like the bold as emphisis. works nice;y. iz x |
| Chelseamuffin. 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuse... I don't like rage. It makes me do strange things that only hurt me more than anyone else. Yep. That's it. Ah well, still a great poem, I loved the opening lines. Keep it up! |
| simply meg 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abusescary! *runsawayintoacorner* Write On! |
| Olivine 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abusei liked the simplicity of the words in the short lines, and the small bit of repitition. it had a nice impact on the poem. and i think the first three lines, "look me in the eye and tell me WHY?" really layed out the anger the reader would feel, reading on. awesome, awesome. keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:- ps--thankyou for the review, im glad you liked my poem :) |