That definitely gets the feeling of rage across. Sometimes there's nothing complicated about rage, the simplicity really fit well.

angry andrew rears his head again! i like the bold as emphisis. works nice;y. iz x

... I don't like rage. It makes me do strange things that only hurt me more than anyone else. Yep. That's it. Ah well, still a great poem, I loved the opening lines. Keep it up!

scary! *runsawayintoacorner* Write On!

i liked the simplicity of the words in the short lines, and the small bit of repitition. it had a nice impact on the poem. and i think the first three lines, "look me in the eye and tell me WHY?" really layed out the anger the reader would feel, reading on. awesome, awesome.

keep on writing Wintertigress-::-

ps-thankyou for the review, im glad you liked my poem :)