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| lexa 2006-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseheh, im cheating, i already reviewed this, but it was b4 everything...heh, wow i mean, wowi forgot how amazing this is...its totaly and undeniably amazing... the way it goes in and out rhyming really makes it flow...it is so fantastic...and it makes me want to huggle u so bad! miss u, talk soon, fantastic... ~lexa |
| Marionette Dancer 2006-07-01 ch 1,  | abusebeautiful, the second piece of yours that ive read, and i am totally in love with your writing style, its so honest and real...keep it up, ive found a new fave!! |
| MilesfromSanity 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWell, it certainly was a good way to vent wasn't it? An interesting read, me likes, the last line though, "I've cried as I've lain." feels a bit...off rhythm, and poetry is a bit about the rhythm. Anyway, just my two cents, good stuff. |
| AchtungBabyAchtung 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseyay! you got an account! nice poem btw ;) iz x |
| Chelseamuffin. 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuse/Sigh/ I hate myself, too. Not for eating, breathing, living. But for some of the things I've done. The mistakes I've made. Ah well. It's a very powerful poem, I loved it. Keep writing. |
| Olivine 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abusep.o.w.e.r.f.u.l. extremely powerful. i used to get those times, but when i was more of a little brat, in my opinion. of course, that was years ago, and i thought that everything should be my way, haha. yea right!! but still, your poem is really good. ...no, its better. 'good' is such a weak describer. keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:- |
| simply meg 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI hate myself too. Makes me think of all the times I've hated myself! |
| incandescent 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, angsty. Nice. |