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Reviews For: In My Crystal Ball

Marionette Dancer
2006-08-08
ch 1,
i think this is one tht u were talking about, and i think im gonna cri...its so good...never walking but drifting... just wow...away she will fly

only because we've got friends like u

loved the title and how it totally tied it all together

~lexa
NothingMoreNothingLess
2006-06-07
ch 1,
Sounds nice...

The 'Tunnel' story was just something that appeared on the screen as I was typing. Nothing to worry about...

TTYL!

Cassandra
BeholderOfImagination
2006-04-18
ch 1,
Now this I like. More upbeat than the rest, and I dunno, I just smiled when I read it.Thanks for writing it mate!~Kris
Olivine
2006-04-15
ch 1,
wow, prettyness!! lol. i liked how pretty much none of the lines rhymed, except for "gone are the frowns/gone are the shackles/that kept her pinned down" and then "and away she will/fly" at the end really set the whole thing down. again, prettyness!! :) haha another i like.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-
simply meg
2006-04-15
ch 1,
makes me want to fly...
babybubbledragon
2006-04-15
ch 1,
that was really gd! well done scrunchy!
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