Aww, very relatable and an understandable feeling. Brilliantly written with such great originality. Keep up the awesome work! =] -Sara

I love how you just make everything flow. Even without rhyme it is has a rhythm and rhyme-like quality that a rhyming poem has...even though it's not a rhyming poem...kind of confusing. Do you kind of get my statement? haha it's awesome

Wow. Amazing, exhilirating, wonderful, enclosed, soaring, beautiful. I really do not know what to say! Warren, it is absolutely truthful, and so original in your own words! I love this poem, this work of art, it's wonderful! It is depressing, but hey, without the pessimists of the world, there would be no optimists either. Very well done, I adore the truth of your words! Good job!

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