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| ghostreader 2007-03-31 ch 1,   | hmm...i feel like i've read this before... are you the same author-sad songs remind me? anyway it was interesting reading this in the third person narrative |
| BlackOleander 2006-10-06 ch 1, | oh yayy! Are you doing this story again? Are you even the same author? I don't know. but I'm excited because I like this so far. |
| ann 2006-04-15 ch 1, | hahahah andrew's ex gf is michelle?you are a clever **. |
| Ashley 2006-04-15 ch 1, | I just reviewed and I can't even figure out if this is the same author as before or not, so if it's not sorry that I assumed you were. Haha. But yeah, I'm excited to see what's going to happen. |
| noodleashy143 2006-04-15 ch 1, | I loved the old story, but this one looks like it will be good too. I'm happy to see stuff from you again! |
| she goes rawr 2006-04-14 ch 1, | m if only guys were this devoted. readz like these give me false hopes. KEEP WRITING, it gives me something to look forward to haha. |
| blessed-dragon 2006-04-14 ch 1, | That was an interesting little story. I certainly enjoyed it. A snippet in the life of ** buddies. Friends with benefits. Whatever it is people call it. It made me pity Stan and envy her at the same time, I think. That's actually pretty sad on my part. But that is all besides the point. I liked the way you kind of put all of her thoughts in parenthesis. I think that's how you spell it. At first I found it all to be annoying but the more I got into the story, the more I decided that I didn't care.Good job! |
| burkle 2006-04-14 ch 1, | YEAH!I'd write you a real review, but I'm so excited to read the re-written version of this story that I can't. But I promise I will when you post the next chapter (hint). lol ~emjay |
| Ashley writes bad poetry 2006-04-14 ch 1, | i thoght i cld trust u. but i gues i waz wrung, **. u suck. u suck for takin advenatege of mi trust. i thght we were bffz 4ever. waz it liez? u no wat?! I hpe u hav another drink n drive urself home. srsly. ure so ** dumb. i cant stand itt. u stole this from meh. and i kno that im dumb n stupid, but i thght we were friendz. why wld u do thiz to meh? Y? i cant stand u and ur liez. u need 2 waatche urself becuz i hav peoplez dat no peoplez. i cld hav u srsly hurt. watch ur backk biatch. srsly. IF ANYONE ELSE IS READING THIS WELL YOU SHOULDNT BE EVEN THOUGH I PUT IT IN A REALLY PUBLIC SETTING. aShLeY |