christ, it's surreally powerful... i love the imagery, i love the symbolism, i love it more than is possible or logical. Very Gorgeous.

This makes me think of a three year old trying to take care of there beat up mom whose near death with there little doctor toys. Good poem.

I like the mothering aspect of this: You trying to fix them and the idea of playing doctor but your tools are too cheap to fix them. There all powerful ideas. Well written, a subtle masterpiece.

Juliet.