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| SapphireEyes16 2008-04-01 ch 3,  | abuseupdate soon! |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2008-02-06 ch 23, | abuseI love this story...Hope you update soon |
| JD xXpulloverXx 2007-11-26 ch 25, | abusewhen are new chapters coming! I am itching to read about Sab. |
| the-raven's-star 2007-10-17 ch 25, | abuseDUDE! you totally had me there for a second...please for the safty of myself and others pelease dont joke like that i almost had a heart attack (which is realy sad if you think about it tho lol) thx |
| IGNIS Elementi 2007-09-26 ch 25, | abuseCan't wait for the next update :) |
| Natural Angel 2007-09-22 ch 25, | abusewhoops didnt read this. well i guess u can forget bout my offer. i prob wouldnt be very reliable cuz my cpu crashes like a lot :P i hope u can fix all the mistakes u wanted 4 ur new story :) i'm looking forward 2 reading it ^_^ Natural Angel |
| Natural Angel 2007-09-22 ch 24, | abusewow that was totally unexpected. tho i do agree that if u fix the story up a bit, it would be better. i would volunteer 2 be ur editor but i'm rarely ever on msn...but i do check my email at least once a day. i think u should totally keep silk in. i like him as a character & he kinda serves as a key 2 sabrina's heart seeing as he's her best friend & all. a sequel sounds good Natural Angel |
| SapphireEyes16 2007-09-18 ch 25, | abusegud luck with the new story and update soon! |
| DiddlingFiddles 2007-09-17 ch 25, | abuseSo it'll be a new story? You're not replacing chapters? IF THE ANSWER IS YES, I LOVE YOU. I dislike it when authors replace chapters. I LIKE READING OLD CHAPTERS. THOSE OLD CHAPTERS ARE THE CHAPTERS THAT KEPT ME READING. WHO KNOWS IF THE NEW VERSION IS GONNA SUCK. =0 Sorry, just had a moment there. So a week maybe? Or three? until the new chapter? |
| fkjbghjgb 2007-09-17 ch 24, anon. | abuseKEEP SILK KEEP SILK! |
| naningxoxo 2007-09-16 ch 25, | abuseWhoo! Wow... all this happened after i missed the computer for a short time? I mean, after i read your latest chapter becoming beautiful, i checked if you updated at least once everyday... but than all of a sudden, i couldn't go on for a while and when i come back you decide to u redo things. dangit.. anyway, i LOVE silk so please keep him on and also i wish you good luck cuz i trust you with all ur decisions even the ones that make me sad... anyway, good luck and i hope to read from you soon! |
| Allison Smith 2007-09-15 ch 2, | abusestraight. it's spelled S-t-r-a-i-G-H-t. there's a "Gh" in there. you keep missing that. otherwise, fantastic! |
| I.F. 2007-09-15 ch 25, anon. | abuseI'll say it again, good luck! Also funny thing, I was watching an episode of House after I read this and a guy(the cop) said, "Everybody lies." |
| marikamaroca 2007-09-15 ch 24, | abuseid love to help you if you want i am on aim and msn alot i shoudl b able to b a help b/c i write myself and have taken alot of advanced english classes(even though i dont bother to employ correct grammer,spelling, word choice or sentence structure in messages or conversation) i am not afraid to point out the flaws in your writing be they typos or more indepth problems i also read too much (: if you feel like contacting me my aim is :marikamaroca and my msn is ~marika PS i also rather like your story |
| valJ 2007-09-15 ch 24, | abuseomg! pls keep silk in the story. i really like him a lot! =) |