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Reviews For: Whipped Cream And Gasoline Told You So

fRISH
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abuseI love the tone kept throughout the entire piece. It is as if the scene was happening somewhere afar.
EmoBear
2006-07-01
ch 1,
abuseHow you write about this so calmly and so mellow amazes me. I love 'A dream of ducked bullets...'
Ariana DeFrancis
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseAmazing. Really powerful imagery, and I liked the use of words. "I inhaled erotic," I loved that line. Beautiful.

--Ari
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