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| fRISH 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the tone kept throughout the entire piece. It is as if the scene was happening somewhere afar. |
| EmoBear 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseHow you write about this so calmly and so mellow amazes me. I love 'A dream of ducked bullets...' |
| Ariana DeFrancis 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Really powerful imagery, and I liked the use of words. "I inhaled erotic," I loved that line. Beautiful. --Ari |