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| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-02 ch 1,  | abusebeautifully written, i like how each line says so much in so few words |
| mostly water 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAH! that is SO BEAUTIFUL! I WISH I COULD FAVE DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT! |
| Unready 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abusekinda reminds me of lyrics from a psychedelic 60's band in a sick way. nice one. |
| sunday night sky 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuselovely imagery, i love the theme. i really like the half rhymes: 'her like will be short/ (wrinkles few)/ teeth marks./ salty residue' beautifully worded. great piece! |
| astral boy 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, again. but i read it more than once because i saw differently at the beginning than i did at the end, something you make me do a lot. which is great. |
| gnimrodd 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abusem.. the opposite of delicious. (for the character) i really like it. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuselove it.fabulous writing. |
| My New Pen Name 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseVery cool, seductive. Great analogies and play with words. |
| she wants revenge 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. i always love the short ones with the amazing imagery. the gypsy's word saysher life will be short(wrinkles few) brilliant lines. i loved every second. kinda reminds me of my friend's vindication for smoking ^_^ great read |
| insomnia in dreamland 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abusepainful and lovely. "the gypsy's words says her life will be short" ^that line was so intense. it explains so much in the poem too. i loved it. |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuselove that last line.. great piece |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseLove how this was written, and I really like the last line. Wonderful work, write on. |
| AllyCred 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWOW...This is so amazing, so much energy and fire in your words, well done, this is perfect, so pure! |
| poetic abortion 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuse"love's secret is lust" beautiful, beautiful. that last line is a killer. ~* noelle |
| Jezsh 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abusebeautifully written, mysterious and fey. |