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painting andromeda
2007-10-12
ch 1,
Flawless. No words. Honestly.
bittersweet.season
2007-09-21
ch 4,
i usually don't like haikus, the bindingness of them - but i have to admit you changed my perspective. each of these is done flawlessly.
multiples of six
2007-09-14
ch 4,
So true! This may be the first haiku I've read that could be said to have a thesis. =) Nicely written, and thank you for the reviews =)
xfail
2007-08-28
ch 1,
Beautifully worded! Good job.
in a jar pk
2007-04-18
ch 3,
these are all so haunting and beautiful...very well written. great work. x
x.beauty.x.from.x.pain.x
2006-09-10
ch 3,
again, just beautiful. 'skin like charcoal ash' -- i lovelove the imagery. beautiful wording. 'a spider-spun soot eyelash' -- simply flawless. again, amazing imagery. gorgeous. 'her lids shan't open.' strong ending to a powerful collection of beautiful pieces. i hope to see more from you.
x.beauty.x.from.x.pain.x
2006-09-10
ch 2,
not quite as powerful as the first haiku, but it is still beautiful and hits hard. 'praying in the ash of death' -- i love the imagery, especially 'on black knees.' simply beautiful. 'cinders of ruin linger still' -- a beautiful ending, perfectly worded. flawless.
x.beauty.x.from.x.pain.x
2006-09-10
ch 1,
absolutely beautiful. 'nights, gone without words' -- somehow the line seems to be layered with imagery and meaning. 'well-spent under lips, tongue' -- gorgeous and nicely worded. 'you: the protector.' stunning ending. this is amazing -- just beautiful.
Chaos Apple
2006-09-09
ch 3,
I love your way with words. And all the imagery is inspiring.
Chaos Apple
2006-09-09
ch 2,
This was gorgeous and beautiful and so striking.

I love it.
Rainy
2006-09-01
ch 3,
I love these! My favorite is 'Legacy of Little Boy.' You've got such vivid imagery in the lot, truly impressive.

Also, I love your penname 'solipsism.':)
multiples of six
2006-09-01
ch 3,
God, these are so good..
Aquafied
2006-09-01
ch 3,
defunct? how so?

eyelashes are a wonder part of our timeso simple and elegant.
Aquafied
2006-09-01
ch 2,
makes me think of a metaphorical fire.
Aquafied
2006-09-01
ch 1,
i am afraidi cant make anything out of this.
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