| Reviews for solipsism |
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Alice Sleeps 4/8/09 . chapter 1The problem with haiku is that there are so few words and such immensely boundless topics bound into the same art form. To find someone skilled at it is uncommon, but this is a very good one. Your use of "the" before protector was nice, as articles are often the first things to go when syllables are limited. In this case, it was gracefully necessary. Good work. |
Aquafied 3/7/09 . chapter 5divinely bright |
painting andromeda 10/12/07 . chapter 1Flawless. No words. Honestly. |
bittersweet.season 9/21/07 . chapter 4i usually don't like haikus, the bindingness of them - but i have to admit you changed my perspective. each of these is done flawlessly. |
multiples of six 9/14/07 . chapter 4So true! This may be the first haiku I've read that could be said to have a thesis. ) Nicely written, and thank you for the reviews ) |
xfail 8/28/07 . chapter 1Beautifully worded! Good job. |
in a jar pk 4/18/07 . chapter 3these are all so haunting and beautiful...very well written. great work. x |
emergency room romantic 9/10/06 . chapter 3again, just beautiful. 'skin like charcoal ash' - i lovelove the imagery. beautiful wording. 'a spider-spun soot eyelash' - simply flawless. again, amazing imagery. gorgeous. 'her lids shan't open.' strong ending to a powerful collection of beautiful pieces. i hope to see more from you. |
emergency room romantic 9/10/06 . chapter 2not quite as powerful as the first haiku, but it is still beautiful and hits hard. 'praying in the ash of death' - i love the imagery, especially 'on black knees.' simply beautiful. 'cinders of ruin linger still' - a beautiful ending, perfectly worded. flawless. |
emergency room romantic 9/10/06 . chapter 1absolutely beautiful. 'nights, gone without words' - somehow the line seems to be layered with imagery and meaning. 'well-spent under lips, tongue' - gorgeous and nicely worded. 'you: the protector.' stunning ending. this is amazing - just beautiful. |
Chaos Apple 9/9/06 . chapter 3I love your way with words. And all the imagery is inspiring. |
Chaos Apple 9/9/06 . chapter 2This was gorgeous and beautiful and so striking. I love it. |
Rainy 9/1/06 . chapter 3I love these! My favorite is 'Legacy of Little Boy.' You've got such vivid imagery in the lot, truly impressive. Also, I love your penname 'solipsism.':) |
multiples of six 9/1/06 . chapter 3God, these are so good.. |
Aquafied 9/1/06 . chapter 3defunct? how so? eyelashes are a wonder part of our timeso simple and elegant. |