|Reviews for solipsism|
| Alice Sleeps 4/8/09 . chapter 1
The problem with haiku is that there are so few words and such immensely boundless topics bound into the same art form. To find someone skilled at it is uncommon, but this is a very good one. Your use of "the" before protector was nice, as articles are often the first things to go when syllables are limited. In this case, it was gracefully necessary. Good work.
| Aquafied 3/7/09 . chapter 5
| painting andromeda 10/12/07 . chapter 1
Flawless. No words. Honestly.
| bittersweet.season 9/21/07 . chapter 4
i usually don't like haikus, the bindingness of them - but i have to admit you changed my perspective. each of these is done flawlessly.
| multiples of six 9/14/07 . chapter 4
So true! This may be the first haiku I've read that could be said to have a thesis. ) Nicely written, and thank you for the reviews )
| xfail 8/28/07 . chapter 1
Beautifully worded! Good job.
| in a jar pk 4/18/07 . chapter 3
these are all so haunting and beautiful...very well written. great work. x
| emergency room romantic 9/10/06 . chapter 3
again, just beautiful. 'skin like charcoal ash' - i lovelove the imagery. beautiful wording. 'a spider-spun soot eyelash' - simply flawless. again, amazing imagery. gorgeous. 'her lids shan't open.' strong ending to a powerful collection of beautiful pieces. i hope to see more from you.
| emergency room romantic 9/10/06 . chapter 2
not quite as powerful as the first haiku, but it is still beautiful and hits hard. 'praying in the ash of death' - i love the imagery, especially 'on black knees.' simply beautiful. 'cinders of ruin linger still' - a beautiful ending, perfectly worded. flawless.
| emergency room romantic 9/10/06 . chapter 1
absolutely beautiful. 'nights, gone without words' - somehow the line seems to be layered with imagery and meaning. 'well-spent under lips, tongue' - gorgeous and nicely worded. 'you: the protector.' stunning ending. this is amazing - just beautiful.
| Chaos Apple 9/9/06 . chapter 3
I love your way with words. And all the imagery is inspiring.
| Chaos Apple 9/9/06 . chapter 2
This was gorgeous and beautiful and so striking.
I love it.
| Rainy 9/1/06 . chapter 3
I love these! My favorite is 'Legacy of Little Boy.' You've got such vivid imagery in the lot, truly impressive.
Also, I love your penname 'solipsism.':)
| multiples of six 9/1/06 . chapter 3
God, these are so good..
| Aquafied 9/1/06 . chapter 3
defunct? how so?
eyelashes are a wonder part of our timeso simple and elegant.