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| painting andromeda 2007-10-12 ch 1,   | Flawless. No words. Honestly. |
| bittersweet.season 2007-09-21 ch 4, | i usually don't like haikus, the bindingness of them - but i have to admit you changed my perspective. each of these is done flawlessly. |
| multiples of six 2007-09-14 ch 4, | So true! This may be the first haiku I've read that could be said to have a thesis. =) Nicely written, and thank you for the reviews =) |
| xfail 2007-08-28 ch 1, | Beautifully worded! Good job. |
| in a jar pk 2007-04-18 ch 3, | these are all so haunting and beautiful...very well written. great work. x |
| x.beauty.x.from.x.pain.x 2006-09-10 ch 3, | again, just beautiful. 'skin like charcoal ash' -- i lovelove the imagery. beautiful wording. 'a spider-spun soot eyelash' -- simply flawless. again, amazing imagery. gorgeous. 'her lids shan't open.' strong ending to a powerful collection of beautiful pieces. i hope to see more from you. |
| x.beauty.x.from.x.pain.x 2006-09-10 ch 2, | not quite as powerful as the first haiku, but it is still beautiful and hits hard. 'praying in the ash of death' -- i love the imagery, especially 'on black knees.' simply beautiful. 'cinders of ruin linger still' -- a beautiful ending, perfectly worded. flawless. |
| x.beauty.x.from.x.pain.x 2006-09-10 ch 1, | absolutely beautiful. 'nights, gone without words' -- somehow the line seems to be layered with imagery and meaning. 'well-spent under lips, tongue' -- gorgeous and nicely worded. 'you: the protector.' stunning ending. this is amazing -- just beautiful. |
| Chaos Apple 2006-09-09 ch 3, | I love your way with words. And all the imagery is inspiring. |
| Chaos Apple 2006-09-09 ch 2, | This was gorgeous and beautiful and so striking. I love it. |
| Rainy 2006-09-01 ch 3, | I love these! My favorite is 'Legacy of Little Boy.' You've got such vivid imagery in the lot, truly impressive. Also, I love your penname 'solipsism.':) |
| multiples of six 2006-09-01 ch 3, | God, these are so good.. |
| Aquafied 2006-09-01 ch 3, | defunct? how so? eyelashes are a wonder part of our timeso simple and elegant. |
| Aquafied 2006-09-01 ch 2, | makes me think of a metaphorical fire. |
| Aquafied 2006-09-01 ch 1, | i am afraidi cant make anything out of this. |