This poem has a deepness that I can't understand. Surely it must, for there is a reason you arranged all the words how you did, but I just can't figure it out. Your message is a simple one, but your deliverance... complex. Good job, that means more people can interpret your poem in many more ways and you can reach more people than a single reasoned poem ever could.

i rather enjoy that the speaker keeps getting distracted and jumping from topic to topic.

i love the cynicism my type of poemmacte as you say

well that's pessimistic enough.

Swool. Thats interesting. Where did u get the idea?