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| Au Printemps 2006-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseOh. Beautiful.And well said! Some of the rhymes were a tinge cheesy "take your freed doom by the pants" is definitely the cheesiest. :P But all the rest worked really well! And the topic itself is beautiful - The sound of it was like someone talking in their sleep - like someone wandering from topic to topic - very strange - different. |