This is cool! Nice story Raining Silver! What kind of mother is that woman anyway? Not being nice to her daughter just because she does good deeds? Shouldn't a mother be happy with good deeds? That's messed up! But in a cool kinda way.

AH! I WANNA KNOE WHAT HAPPENS!

I'm used to confusing. I confuse myself most of the time.

Anyhoo, I found this chapter funny. I liked the name Pompous Arrogant Prick- that made my day!

~FFNeko

So short... But very detailed.

I like princes... At first I thought it said princess. -_-"

~FFNeko

OMG She's going to kill the perv bunny!

Die Bunny Die *.*

~FFNeko

O.O You have perverted bunnies and I have perverted kitties. Hee-hee, kind of ironic, ne?

Seems like a cute story, but I need to read more obviously, so I will leave another review shortly... Like in a few minutes or so.

~FFNeko

MMkay, I'll review. Lol. So, anyways, XD Great! Lol, very comic. um... Doom?-Ryoki

Well... this was pretty short, so the bunny is a vampire prince, hmm... lets see what happens next.

Hmm... pretty good, I can already sense the chaos that will insue, the rabbit will talk right?

Okay, for your first time with a humor, I say that its pretty good, BUT you could've had the bunny come in a little more dynamic, but other than that, it was great.

Okay, so I just tried writing a review on your third chapter... And I was all, happily writing, all happy like... And I finish... AND BOM! Half of my review is gone along with my double-spacing after periods... I really don't like this site. Anywho, if I can remember what I said... It was something about you haveing good grammar, and and and, WANTING TO READ MORE!

WOOT! Okay, so, I was just reading another work of fiction, and I read you know, the first two paragraphs... And I could tell exactly what would happen. SERIOUSLY! I'm like, really excited now! Because this one, I didn't expect ANYTHING like what you've written in this third chapter! I'm ancy to read more! It's already eating me!

This is so funny!!

Keep up the good work! This is getting better and better by the minute!

So cute! I can't wait to hear more from you. I love the attention to detail and the humor you use. It's awesome! Well, later!

Knew you were going to write one of these stories sometime. Just make sure you don't repeat yourself TOO much, and you'll be fine.

Your voice really sticks out, and in a very good way, I mean. It sounds just like you. ~_^