yes.. one of those days.. (that we all have but think no one knows that we have them) ..but maybe not everyone feels like this soemtimes.. (i love this poem) so good. you are so good with words... but we all know words can still never describe all this... (you are also very brave to put this on here.. i have poems similiar (not as good) but i would never be brave enough to share them.)

Wow, that's very powerful. I can relate to that, putting up a strong image but secretly just needing a good cry.

I'm sad that you were fealing so bad, Mana. This is really deep. It talks about a side that people rarely show and talk about even less. It is a side everyone has but many deny it. I really like it.

Really interesting style - I never would have thought to write like this.

I can relate (And not just to the tall thing XP)

"Cry until your stomach hurts like you’ve been smacked by a wrecking ball" That's great description. I haven't cried like that in so long I'd forgotten. (I'm not healthy, lol)

"Act strong, like nothing bothers you. And then let it out." Nice.

It's so true about crying-sleeping-waking. Everything does seem better when you've slept. I find my problem is that when I feel low, I try and sleep, because I know that I'll feel better when I wake up. But it doesn't make my problems go away. And I have to face it when they all come back.

Wow, it's bringing back horrible memories just thinking about it.

I hope you feel better. ;-D Very nicely written piece, interesting style.

Keep writing!