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| Rebekah 2006-07-02 ch 10,  | Well-rounded story, I loved it. It needs a little bit more transition in places. I really liked Greg, quite an enjoyable character. |
| tash`d 2006-06-15 ch 10, | oh... a happy ending... i love those! who cares if it was predictable? arent most love stories like that? |
| lalaLAMA 2006-06-14 ch 10,  | omg! Is that the ending? it was a little predictable but so sweet! Fab storie. P.S thx 4 mentioning me!! |
| Aquarius21 2006-06-14 ch 10, | What? It's over? Wait.. what? No. Are you serious? There must be an epilougue with 'and they lived happily ever after' SOMEWHERE. Wow. This was a realyl great story, it was wonderfully written. Great job! And have a nice evening.Aqua |
| EvangelineGoth 2006-06-14 ch 10, | I loved the ending, though I can't help but wonder if they got married at the end? I HOPE SOO! Loved the story VERY much! |
| mippon 2006-06-14 ch 10, | :D What a happy, predictable ending! Yay! I loved this story... Hehehe! Well written, well... written... good plot, and everything... Sad to see it end. Sequel, huh, huh? By the way, thanks for reviewing my story! ^^ |
| tash`d 2006-06-14 ch 9, | hey! great chapter! sounds like the end is near... i definately hopin 4 a happy endin but u neva no... neway, cant wait 4 more! |
| bright indian stars 2006-06-12 ch 9, | whe another great chap! yayness! can harldy wait for the next one! |
| lalaLAMA 2006-06-12 ch 9, | NO, you cant just end that FABOULOUS chapter right there. update soon |
| EvangelineGoth 2006-06-12 ch 9, | OMG, THIS ISN'T GOING TO END UP LIKE THIS, RIGHT? CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE! |
| lalaLAMA 2006-06-12 ch 1, | 2 words 2 discribe ur great chapter , long and faboulous |
| Soul Tea 2006-06-12 ch 9, | Oh...my...GOD! I can't wait for the next chapter! You're making me so nervous! =( This is really, really good writing. Congrats on making such a great story. |
| mippon 2006-06-12 ch 9, | YEAH, BABY! You update fast. I like. You update more. I love. ^^ SO update! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT |
| tash`d 2006-06-11 ch 8, | wow! i wasnt expectin an update so soon! great chapter! da end is cumin? i hope its a happy ending... im a hopeless romantic :) |
| bright indian stars 2006-06-11 ch 8, | heyy! jsut started reading teh story! great chaps! can hardly wait for the next one! u've done a great job! |