|Reviews for Collision Of The Sky|
| Hershey249 4/15/06 . chapter 1
What can I say, the last two lines can often make or break a poem. You've made it. :) I love how you've portrayed that the rhythms of consequence, the beating, of broken hearts continues even after they are gone...that's just an awesome wording of that concept.
This might have gone overboard with the references to other figures, like the little boy blue, but I think you kept it from doing so. I like muchly. :)