heart touching ...good bless her soul

Wow. J'adore. It was very well written, and I am such a poetry person... very moving.

this is written so beautifully ^^ good job!

Good job. I think you conveyed the feeling well.

Aww...I'm sorry about your friend! This poem really hits home to me because only a few months ago, one of my friends died in a car accident, and nobody has been the same since, so I know what it feels like. I was thinking about that just yesterday too.

But in terms of writing, very nice work!

Very good work. The narrative is clear and the voice is strong. Well done.