This Taran character intrigues me. Yeah, I do have to take summer school, but I'm actually not dreading it. I'm only taking two classes and some of my friends are going to be in them. Plus it'll be a nice change from student teaching last semster (aka less work). I like this chapter...are Rheesa and Taran gonna be come an 'item'?

-Sunne

Well, I have to say, the first thing that I noticed was the first person narration (duh). You mold the characters thoughts and dialect in a realistic fashion, which is nice. Is this based on a personal tale, or is this completely made up?

CRITIC: The only thing I can critic is that the sentences seem choppy, therefore the read isn't in a flow, and rather hard to read. But yet again, the narrator is a 14 year old girl, so enough said. haha

PERSONAL NOTE: It's not my favorite feild to read up on (teenaged girl problems), due to being a teenaged boy with too many. But, I think it's worthy of reading. ^__^

umm...i couldn't say that i love it but i like it hope you understand...improve and update...

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i lyk it, update sooni give u 1 ANGEL rating kiss

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ok...just fine...update soon and don' be lazy!oh...just kidding!so...ZOEY 101 huh? its funny!...u know who i AM...

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Thanks for reviewing Here We Go Again. I love this story. It reminds me a lot of my grandfather, sort of weird I guess, but it is really good.

A nice story, with good dialogue and first-rate first-person description. Your characters are true and ordinary, but in a good way. I would like to see what the next chapter would be like.

By the way, will the story be told from a POV other than Rheesa's? You imply that by writing "Rheesa's POV" at the top of the page.

Anyhow, keep up the good work.

so Rheesa/Juliet/zany is going to have a summer at school(yuck) with her friends(yay). It is an interesting beginning esp. her life with her grandfather. I was hooked when he called her gauche (dont ask me why). cant wait to hear more about Ralph (is he a sophomore too?) and her friends from school.

hey girl! this sounds interesting, and i think youre going to make some twist on 'friends' arent you? lol i think duh. well write more! im going off to read your other bit of writing now(:

Thanks for reviewing Belleview Chronicles, I appreciated it. I really enjoy the character of Rheesa. She's witty, sarcastic, humorous, and fun to read about. That sucks that she has to go to summer school...but at least she isn't going b/c she failed something. I'm doing summer school this summer too, yet it's of my own choice. Its the only time I have to take the classes I want before I graduate in December. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Cool story, very interesting so far. Update soon!

I like it, its sounds like it's gunna get more intresting, please update it asap!