I can so easily relate to this piece. I really loved it. You've got an amazing writing style and wording. I love how you put those feelings of reluctance and indecision into words. Even the question in the second stanza add so much and make the reader think along with the poem and after it for a while.. great writing, keep it!

--Meme

good, i see the deeper meaning. you have set it out well. keep it up. ;)

this is good. i see this poem as how you view it, yet i catch different meaning. wirte on and maybe check out my work ^.^