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Moosher 2006-04-15 . chapter 1
Another great poem! This starts off with one emotion, and ended off with a totally different emotion coming from the same situation. I love the twist.

I know how it is to feel like you have to let out your thoughts about a certain person in words, but not really mean them.. And I've gotten in trouble because that person turned out to be the exact opposite of understanding.. Not that I didn't know I wouldn't hear something back myself.

Now that friendship is hanging by a thread, and I think twice before talking. N e ways, thanx for writing this. Keep writing. Ur a great writer, and im just saying that.

--Meme
sunday night sky 2006-04-15 . chapter 1
that last stanza is great! especially that last line. amazing! great job.
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