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| xForeverAndAlwaysx 2006-08-29 ch 1,   | I love this, it's so real. You did an amazing job of finding just the right words to convey emotion. It also has a really good rhythm to it. You are very talented. |
| Single Black Rose 2006-08-20 ch 2, | i can just feel the pain emanating from the words on this page. it's is expressly beautiful and i love the way you made it push tears to the forfront of my mind. i enjoyed it and hope to see more!~Rose |
| Driderqueen 2006-06-07 ch 2, | Another great work, this is great, it has a poem for both sides of the relationship! Very strong! I LOVE IT! XD |
| LordK 2006-05-27 ch 1, | Very nice. I liked this song. It had very strong form, and it was formatted very well. The verses make a strong statement from the beginning. The chorus has catchy lyrics that complement each other wonderfully, and the B section or bridge, or whatever you call it, was WONDERFUL. Ah, for criticism: the metrical patter confused me often while i was reading it. The second verse could stand a little more consistency, I think. |
| controv3rsyxx 2006-04-15 ch 1, | i liked this very much. the verses kinda touched me (: and it wld really make a great song. can't wait to read your other works. |
| Single Black Rose 2006-04-15 ch 1, | This particular poem touched my heart, you are a fantastic writer and i sincerely hope you will continue to write with such finesse as you did here...i love it, and trust me, i wouldn't have reviewed if i didn't... feel free to email or w/eSlinky717@aol.com~Single Black Rose |