yippie

i think i took too much crack lol

l'histoire est ging grand ! Écrire plus.

yay Tristan! you make him sound like a total gentlemen...lol

i like the dialogue...yay u said bastard.

k sarah i really think im on crack...lol

get some pics of how u think the characters look like impy!

Vous voir à l'école

hey this is great hmm lets see i really hope that tristan and emile will get together. its awesome how you have stuff in french here cause i take french and i actually understand some stuff! lol

I'm guessing your French is elementary by the title.

The word you would use would be "spectecale" not "exécution".

Contact me if you want to talk French usage and grammar and such.

:)

Oh wow, your story is really well done and well weaved. This story feels really artsy, so far so good.

Everton is awesome as well. but thats for another review;)

oh wow I love this! the plot is interesting and I love the sprinkling of French through out the dialogue. I love both Raphael and Tristan (especially Tristan) and your writing has a sort of mature, educated air to it, which is lovely and pleasant to read. this is spectacular, keep writing, and update soon!

GO SARAH! GO FRENCH! i sound like a **en cheerleader but lets just say the story is fantastique! bye

- tenz

good job keep writing in this one please i really liked Everton btw