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| the naked civil servant 2006-10-18 ch 1,   | "while the world tumbles on recklessly," that's so pretty. |
| Spare Change 2006-04-25 ch 1, | great work! if only i had that ability to standstill while the world rushes by... great poem, it had me relax a little :) |
| eighteen hundred 2006-04-23 ch 1, | I can't hum, and it kills me. This is good; I liked the last stanza best. |
| lackluster 2006-04-21 ch 1, | bittersweet like nostalgia. it has a childhood simplicity to it that i can't help but love. |
| Prevaricate 2006-04-15 ch 1, | This is a sweet poem. The tone of it is young, but not childish. Very well written, good word choice. |