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| Mage Dudette 2006-04-16 ch 1, | wow. love the image i got in my head from this. |
| Elewyn 2006-04-15 ch 1, | The idea of this is good but the rhyming takes away from it. |
| sunday night sky 2006-04-15 ch 1, | aww i love the ending! great rhyme. nice piece! |