Eww. . .I wouldn't want to be stuck in Dawn's situation. 0.o But she deserved it! :P

James: . . .She gets the picture. Leave her alone about Dawn.

Me: Oh shaddup. Anywho, aww, they're together! ^_^ Well, that was offical last chappie, but who cares! ! ! :P

I liked this. :) It's kind of funny to think about all the people in PoF that are connected to this and stuff. :P I dunno why, but I'm just weird like that, too. :P

Anyways. . .my brain is dead again, so I'm going to go now before I say something really dumb and regret it for the rest of my life. . .0_o Great story! :)

~Servant of Kastor~

Interesting. So this is how it all began. Again, I feel compelled to say 'Interesting.'

I don't think your portrayal of Dawn was very realistic. She would have forseen Erik asking about Gia and known how to respond. Although it gave you a quick way to get Erik and Gia together, it almost seems like you took a shortcut.

Good story so far, I hope to see more.

Shadowhound

Grr. . .somehow, I KNEW Dawn would try to hurt/kill Gia. . .*Glares at Dawn* Can I kill her now?!

Mark: Hey; killing annoying people is MY department! You kill evil people!

Me: . . .She's both. We'll work together.

Mark: *Smirks* I like it.

Me: *Also smirks* Anyways. . .at least Erik and Gia have admitted their feelings for each other. ^_^ Now they can- - -

James: If that statement says anything about hurting/killing Dawn, I will do what you were going to describe to you!

Me: Ha! As if you could!

James: Why wouldn't I be able to? *Notices a fireball the size of China above him* Uh. . .never mind. . .*Screams like a little girl and runs*

Me: *Grins* That gag never fails. . .*Pulls carboard-cutout of a fireball out of the way* Anyways. . .um, my brain is dead, so never mind. Just UPDATE! :P

~Dragon Guardian~

interesting story. i can understand people needing a break from their stories. good job with this, i hope to see more soon.

Shadowhound

heeheehee...

*rubs hands* I LOVE it as always. I like the extra desc, though.

:) CD

*Glares at Dawn* *Kicks Dawn* *Wants to hurt Dawn REALLY badly but has to wait* >:( I hate her already! ! ! Not only is she irritating, but she's evil! >:(

Good so far! :) I like Erik. :P I feel sorry for him. . .*Glares at Dawn again* And I hate Dawn. *Glares harder*

I'd like to say more, but I've got to leave for church pretty soon, and I still haven't eaten breakfast (hehehehe. . .) Please update soon!

~Dragon Guardian~