Reviews for Belleview Chronicles

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Shishou 2008-06-27 ch 3,	abuseI love this style of writing. I could never take a crack at it since it is so unique, and I applaud you for using it. Only I think you're rushing things. The information is coming a little too fast. And since in this style, reading seems to speed up a lot, the info is overwhelming. Meg Cabot has a few books written in this style I think will help you.
amaryllisfaye 2008-06-26 ch 20,	abusethis is really good. totally original too! am so loving it. hehe
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 19,	abuse=( Cruel mother. It's a good thing that Megan/Ian alerted Connor to their presence. I can't imagine my mom giving me that piece of crap. Hmm... have Lacey and Connor kissed yet? Hehe.
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 14,	abuseyey! they're finally together. It's about time, too =) Hmm, I wonder where their Operation Pool Party leads them. Fave char: Lacey! Can't help, she's adorable and I see a piece of meself in her hehe. Though Im hardly a troublemaker. Im more like... a mastermind for the troubles and order my cousins about muhahaha
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 13,	abuseHmm, i think you had a typo at the periodical results =) You wrote 1244 instead of 1944 for the New York Times (Tragedy Strikes...) "P.S. Reason # 25 why I adore Ian – He has really nice hands with long slender fingers. I’m a sucker for nice hands. -Megan" - Ohmy, O_O I think I fairly have a good idea what Megan and Ian were up to. Hahaha. Teenage hormones.
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 11,	abuseRandom Thought # 16: Lacey’s hair smells really nice. Especially when she hugged me after we won the scrimmage. That was our first ever hug. - I think this is pretty sweet. Kinda reminds me of the guy i used to like hahaha. He has a knack for smelling out things, putting stuffs in his mouth (i.e., shaker (musical instrument), pencil case, licking pencils). I know it seems odd that i liked this guy (we're still good friends btw,) but he's just an amazing writer and he's quirky like that. Haha. And oh, that Operation Pool Party spin is a nice addition too. =) I'm loving each progress so far. Good job!
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 10,	abuseLOL at Connor having Athlete's Foot. While it's no means laughable, it's just that... he smelled it. And even tasted it. Ew! That is so Connor-ish thing to do. hahaha
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 9,	abuseHowever, I must say if they do end up going out with each other, they would make an adorably cute couple. They have similar personalities but are just different enough in appearances to complement each other. - Megan Hahaha I think I wrote something similar in my past chapter review :D You've found a great idea on how to show glimpses of your characters' personalities through their diaries/IM convos. Good touch; unique too. =) I forgot to mention that I always LOL whenever they get caught during calculus class passing notes. :D
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 4,	abuse-Contemplate the meaning of this ‘moment’. -genius. I love Lacey's character. She's really funny. You pulled off the kind of character I'm trying to picture out. Well, I mean, just a piece of her. :D I'm usually a supporter of the Opposites Attract Law (in the romance), but I think Lacey and Connor complements each other well. They'll be adorable together.
Sylvia Marri 2008-03-10 ch 2,	abuseHaha You have a very refreshing style. It's neat, it makes the readers actually put two and two together, and it's really funny. Good job! Looking forward to reading more chapters :D
Arthi 2008-02-23 ch 11,	abuseIt's kind of hard to imagine the story when you have no idea how everybody looks. The only thing we know is that he or she is cute or something, and that Lacey has brown hair. Could we get more info on that?
A.K.A. Writer's Block 2007-09-12 ch 20,	abuseso, i thought that the format of this would KILL me, but i find myself strangely obsessive... hm... well, this story is seriously laugh-out-loud funniness. YES! i can't wait para mas.
Pyrgus 2007-09-09 ch 20,	abusehaha. love this story. (and 300 = 300 men who have 28 packs that could shatter concrete.) can't wait for the next update! muchlove! Pyrgus
Pyrgus 2007-09-08 ch 12,	abusethis is a bookmark like object for my self. Can't wait until I can finish reading. muchlove! pyrgus!
Out-Spoken-Runaway 2007-09-01 ch 20,	abuseI love this story! Haha, Conner is AWESOME! He's so adorable! And Lacey, lmao, she's so funny. They're a perfect couple! Man, Connor's mom is a **! I can relate, my dad is exactly like that lmfao. Megan and Ian! They seem in the middle of it all! Oh god, you gave me a heartattack when Ian was in the hospital! I'm glad he's okay. =) Tanna And Zack are the quiet ones aren't they? Haha, I like that name, Zack. =D Keep writing! Out-Spoken-Runaway

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