Heya, sorry I've not been around for so long! *slaps forehead* Just logged on today for the first time in ages, first place I came was here, and found loads more to read yay! Not sure if you're still writing on this, but I hope so =)

This is the best story I ever read. PLEASE continue writing!

Loved it, tis awesome that Tanna is an artist

Interesting Bretton story...love to read more about it!

Loved the funy jumpers...lolls

This is nonsense, just so you know. The whole-not-updating-thing! I love this story, UPDATE!

I lvoe how Conner seems to be quite a 'deep character,' and the poetry is perfect.

So far so good...make that great :XD

So cute!

lols, gets better and better as i continue to read

Such amazingness and general funnyness...though I myself and my friendsh ave never thought of doign osmethign so crazy as what Lacey might ocme up with. lols

O! loved chapter 3, amazing how the parents ofund out about the detention...or maybe not.

Loved it again, the structure is perfect and I lov the quirkness of this story...brill.

I love this layot..tis much moe interesting, kind ofl iek someone is snippign through all the letters, the diary entries and readin through the notes. :XD

I love this style of writing. I could never take a crack at it since it is so unique, and I applaud you for using it. Only I think you're rushing things. The information is coming a little too fast. And since in this style, reading seems to speed up a lot, the info is overwhelming. Meg Cabot has a few books written in this style I think will help you.