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| tesa131313 2006-12-09 ch 1,  | abuseIncredibly strong and heavy on emotion. Jawdropping really. |
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuse"(As if raping the truth changes it.)" I love that line. You're really an amazing writer, you realize this, right? |
| Consolation 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, this poem had me rereading it at least three times. It was so powerful and intense that it gave me shivers when i read it! The analogies are incredible and imagery is near perfect! Please keep writing! |
| Sakru angelqueen 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is a poem right? The writting isn't bad the poem was quiet enjoable. Oh and thanks for the review. |
| poetic abortion 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseNot only did you use second-person narrativ but you also crossed religous and political commentary into one fantastic poem - I love it. The lines flow more fluidly each time I read and the lines become more haunting, more precise with each reading. It is brillant, ** up beautiful and dangerously refreshing (I've rarely read something on this sight that has juggled such issues without being all too "in your face" for my liking). It was a poem, to simply state it. ~* Noelle |
| addie pray 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. ** by the church feeling to it. Elegant and intelligent, I would really like to read more of you. Flows time after time reading it. |
| simply meg 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWow... that was extremely powerful! Nice job... Write On! |