Incredibly strong and heavy on emotion. Jawdropping really.

"(As if raping the truth changes it.)" I love that line. You're really an amazing writer, you realize this, right?

Wow, this poem had me rereading it at least three times. It was so powerful and intense that it gave me shivers when i read it! The analogies are incredible and imagery is near perfect! Please keep writing!

This is a poem right? The writting isn't bad the poem was quiet enjoable.

Oh and thanks for the review.

Not only did you use second-person narrativ but you also crossed religous and political commentary into one fantastic poem - I love it. The lines flow more fluidly each time I read and the lines become more haunting, more precise with each reading. It is brillant, fucked up beautiful and dangerously refreshing (I've rarely read something on this sight that has juggled such issues without being all too "in your face" for my liking). It was a poem, to simply state it.

* Noelle

Beautiful. Fucked by the church feeling to it. Elegant and intelligent, I would really like to read more of you. Flows time after time reading it.

Wow... that was extremely powerful! Nice job... Write On!