Reviews for A Fleeting Week of Haiku

charedice 2006-05-13 ch 1,	these are nice. I like the second, and the third. And, I don't think the way they feel broken is a problem; that kind of thing is what one would expect in a poem with a somewhat sad ending, and it doesn't detract from the meaning at all. good work :)
Elphie Thropp 2006-05-01 ch 1,	Oh, pretty! I really like the last haiku, especially the "Now you drown in wine." (And in your question about Reina and Elias the answer is YES) Haikus are so difficult. I tried them when I was younger, but I found the syllable limit too...limiting? I really like your haikus. The only problem is they, as you said, are rather disjointed so it's kinda like HaikuBAMAnother haikuBAM! If you could find a way to use each of these in a larger project or projects that would be really cool.
mizu no kokoro 2006-04-18 ch 1,	nice string of haikus~ i thought most of it was quite connected. keep writing!