Thanks, for the review... This poem is quite enchanting... It's so neat the way you wrote it...^.^

Holy crap. the last stanza of this was enough to get me to give you a review. i loved it.

"breath stops and you swear/you saw me in another life"

Great ending. I like this one, though I don't know why. It's romantic in a way. I really liked the first stanza.