|Reviews for OneSided Story|
| wildwolffree17 6/12/06 . chapter 1
Stunning and succinct.
| Procrastinating Fairy 4/16/06 . chapter 1
...Whoa, metaphor'd glory everywhere and I love it. I glare at the title as it appears on your page because Fictionpress seems to not like the little dashy thing (it killed Kinda-Sorta, too) but yeah.
You have an interesting tednency of making two sentences drag out to adequate poem length and I love you for that. Ending line was cold and bitter love and the rest of it was very picturable and when you got to the end, you kind of realized it was mostly a metaphor and yeah.